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Torn

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:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hi Lisa,
u know, i watch 100000000000 works.....and in my life i had watched 1000000000000000000000000 works......for this my eyes are damned now <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="24" height="27" alt=":raincloud:" title="Grr."/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> But this is only fun for me

The only model image not is enough to create an excellent work! Yes i have understand ur message..but this isn't ur message. that photographer did this model shoot...and the idea was ur.
For this reason, this work is very but very hard to do....Why? Because need a story and background not is enough to create a story (use ur creativity) or atmosphere! (do u remember? MY engl is bad <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>)

That background is too flat...and the model perspective, collides with it too!

I know well...this is a negative critique.....and i know...negative critique are hard to be accepted....There are some people dont like critique and for this i write always to them: "amazing work" and it ok because not all people are interested into Technique!